Postby Matthew_Anderson » Wed Dec 28, 2005 11:33 am
I watched most of the bouts and here are my comments:
Mostly, you are all making choppy little cuts, mostly to the hands and arms. Very little passing footwork or committed attacks where you close the range. Don't get me wrong, the hands are a valid target and if someone puts them out there like that, I'll hit them too. But I don't like having it done to me! You are all getting smacked in the hands a lot because you are all just reaching out trying to play "sword tag" without really commiting to the attack with proper intent and closing of the range. The best way to protect your hands is to make committed attacks, in range, on target, to your opponet's head and body. In this way, you force him to deal with your attack by setting it aside, displacing it, etc. which in turn, sets you up to twitch, wind, thrust, etc., maintaining the initiative and fighting in the "Vor". By contrast, if you are just reaching out with your arms making half-hearted attempts to cut, it's easy for your opponent to just countercut your hands. This is something I see a lot and constatntly work on with new people. You may instinctively feel safer not commiting to the attack, but in reality, a good fencer will tear you apart if you fight this way.
In general, most of your guards look a little sloppy, i.e holding your vom tag almost verticle and very low in front of your shoulder, pflug with the tip very high instead of leveled at the opponent. This makes your attacks and transitions from these guards weaker and slower, and invites your opponent to take advantage of it instaed of being held at bay. Also, as you strike and move, you should be moving from one guard to the next, rather than just ending up with your weapon out of position or your feet backwards, etc.
Also, althouh you may have excluded it intentionally, I didn't see any grappling. There were several instances where weapons could have been seized, and strikes, trips, throws, etc. could have been executed.
Please don't take offense, I think you guys are doing pretty well for not having had any hands-on instruction and I assumed you posted here to get some constructive critique. If you could swing it, I think you'd really benefit from having John over for a seminar. I think it would be a real eye-opener and give you a good grounding in the basics to work from. Good luck and keep training!
Matt Anderson
SFS
ARMA Virginia Beach