Postby Sean Gallagher » Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:10 pm
Great first attempt.
I think most of them had my criticisms covered, but i want to stress the footwork.
I think if you slowed down the speed of the florysh just a hair, you would have time for your footwork to catch up with your body. Often times i saw a disconnect between your hands/sword and your feet/lowerbody. All your power is going to come from manipulating all your body weight into your sword.
So keep your footwork solid. Also. Show some levels. When you went offline, you stayed high, and you almost jumped to the side. And while there are certainly times where that is appropriate. THat's not the only way you go offline. I'd like to see you get lower, bend your knees a little, especially when you go offline with a krump or zwerch.
That's my two cents.