Postby Allen Johnson » Wed Jun 16, 2004 11:24 pm
With much fear and trepidation do post this: This is my basic outline for the first of the two duels for this film. Here are the problems I'm running into. First, I'm no expert and certainly have mountains to learn. However, it has been really hard to quickly train 2 guys who have never held a blade before in their life in 2 1/2 weeks before we start shooting. The director while giving me pretty wide creativity on this, wants certain things to take place that I have to work in. In my 'scripting' of this, I've used a mixed bad, wattered down version of technical terms to help me know exactly whats going on- but I cant get too detailed or too wrapped up with the terms or else there is no way the actors are going to remember them. Also its good to hear them referr to it as 'tondo' instaid of 'sideways cutty thingy'. So here we go- I welcome the criticism- if nothing else, I hope to learn alot from this: Here is fight 1 of 2:
RED LIGHT DUELS
Fight 1
Mort vs Alex
(Cassio vs Roderigo)
CASSIO
Armed with RAPIER and CLOAK
Casually standing
RODERIGO
Armed with RAPIER and Buckler
Guard: Porta di Ferro Stretta
<R. closes distance in 2nd
<R. thrusts from 2nd to High Outside
C. parries to the Inside and with a passing step, slips right- no
effort to riposte>
(positions are now reversed)
C. Remains in casual stance- left foot leading
R. enters Chingiara Porta di Ferro
<R. advances with a quick step and a blestra
<R. lunges in 3rd to C's middle.
C. uses cloak & rapier to push thrust to outside as he does a stop
kick to R's lunging right leg.>
R. scrambles to his feet
C. Takes up High Guard (point up)- Right foot advancing
R. gets in Pflug- left foot leading
C. advances with middle fendente>
<R. uses buckler to displace to inside and ripostes to C's head.
C parries to High Inside and ripostes to R's High Inside>
<R brings up buckler to meet his hilt for the parry, and pushes C's
blade aside as he lunges.
C leaps back to avoid thrust.
C. Takes up High Guard (point on line)- Right foot advancing
R. remains in Pflug
C advances with thrust in 1st to R's low inside>
<R parries and ripostes in 3rd to low middle
C beats thrust to his left with rapier and cloak
C starts a left passing step as he winds his blade on top of R's and
uses cloak arm to pin R's buckler to his body. C's passing step
will be ended with a thrust to R's upper chest.>>
R. dies
"Why is there a picture of a man with a sword in his head on your desk?" -friends inquiry